2. Ravitch
says that a well-educated person “has a well-furnished mind, shaped by reading
and thinking about history, science, literature, the arts, and politics. The well-educated person has learned
how to explain ideas and listen respectfully to others” (16). I agree and disagree with her
definition. I agree with the first
half, in that I believe a well-educated person is one who studies materials
from a wide array of disciplines.
To be well-educated, one must have a thirst for knowledge that extends
beyond the constrictions of such labels.
This kind of person is not after knowledge in one particular area, but
rather is in search of universal truths and connections. However, I do not agree with the second
sentence of her definition in its entirety. While I do believe that listening is an important skill to
learning, I do not necessarily concur that a well-educated person has to be
able to explain ideas. That is the
skill of a teacher, not of just any scholar. A person can be smart and well-educated without being able
to effectively share their knowledge.
I’ve seen that many times with ineffective teachers and professors: they
are well-educated and know a lot about a lot, but they do not possess the
ability to express that with the world at large.
My family and me at my UC Davis graduation ceremony.
3. After the class discussion on the book, it seemed I was on the same page as a lot of my peers. We seemed to all have understood Ravitch’s words and the theme of her message in these initial chapters. So, the same things that stood out to me while reading chapters one and two on my own were the same things that stood out to me during discussion. The two quotes mentioned above in question one are points I found very important for the reasons I described. To make a more general statement, what stood out to me was her honesty, not just in terms of her opinion on the way we test students, but also in terms of her own beliefs. She did not try to conceal or lessen her own mistakes in thought, but rather wrote about them in detail to better support her current ideas on the matter. To me, that added some validity to her position because she was more able to explain why the facts made her change her mind. There was nothing I really wanted to say and didn’t during our discussion, but I suppose one thing I wish I had brought up earlier to increase the amount of discussion around the issue was the matter of the time period in which things like ANAR and NCLB were each written. I mentioned at the very end of the discussion that I thought it was very easy for us to see now that something like NCLB was a bad idea. However, we have to take into consideration what else was happening in American culture during the same time period. Hindsight is always 20/20, but the vision of the present moment and what its effects will be on the future is nowhere near as clear. I wish I had brought this up earlier in the discussion, so that I could hear the thoughts of my peers, which has already proven to be so helpful over these last couple of weeks.
4. After jotting down my own gaps in knowledge within my subject area (based upon the California state framework for grades nine through ten), I found myself with a rather long list. One that stood out to me was Writing standard 2.5, which is about writing business letters. I was surprised that this was an English standard. Although I understand why it would be put in English, I have not worked with one English teacher who teaches this material. I chose this standard as the gap I would focus on for this blog entry because I felt like it was one of my larger gaps. Most of the other standards I included on my list were areas where I felt like I needed improvement, but that I at least had a little knowledge about; I had no idea where to even begin writing a business letter, let alone where to begin teaching such a skill. To better my understanding of this gap, I found three resources to help me. The first was an article from the Chicago Tribune entitled “How to Write a Business Letter” by Bill Daley. The second resource was the book Barron’s How To Write Better Business Letters by Andrea B. Geffner. While there were several books on the subject, this was the one that kept the most consistently high rating scores from readers. The third and final source (and the one I will explain in more detail) was a website activity from readwritethink.org with the heading “Letter Generator”. This site is great. It is an interactive webpage where you simply input the important information by following the prompts on the page and answering them in the provided text boxes. After following the steps, the program creates the letter in the proper format for you. The website does give some guiding help about what kind of information to include in the body of the letter, but it is very general. If I were to teach this standard, I would use the article or book mentioned above as the main tools for learning what such a letter should actually include, but I would use the website to teach formatting.
If you would like to check out the letter generator website, here is the link.
5. Through my research for my project [please see previous entries for more information about my research topic and my guiding questions], I have started compiling quite the list of sources. The first source is called The Latino Achievement Gap by A. Michael Madrid. This article focused mostly on how Latino students are treated in school, in terms of the facilities and the teachers. This article was very qualitative, in that it used previously existing statistics and teacher focus groups. Most of the information in this article didn't surprise me (things like Latino students are often found in schools with lesser amenities and facilities, Latino students come with a wide range of English language skills, making it difficult to create a lesson plan for them as a group, etc), but this article gave specific facts and figures that I found really helpful. A lot of the research they mentioned sounded really interesting to me, so I will absolutely be looking through the list of sources for more articles. This author seemed to know a lot about the subject of the research, but I think the research itself about teacher beliefs about Latino students was not super strong. The findings were intriguing (they showed how a large part of the problem for Latino student learning is low expectations and investment by their teachers), but they were from teachers only in high Latino-populated schools. I would want to know about how teachers with more of a mixed population would feel; would they assume a higher learning potential? Lesser learning potential? This article was a good start, but it will not be the crux of my research. The second is Brain-behavior relationship in reading acquisition are modulated by socioeconomic factors by Kimberly G. Noble, et al. The research studied how SES could actually affect brain behavior. The study looked at areas of the brain that were related to phonological language skills and found that a higher SES could actually help make up for lesser brain-behavior in these areas, while a lower SES meant no “extra help” in these areas. In other words, having a higher SES actually meant higher performance with lower brain functioning. This information was incredibly profound to me: factors like our parental education, occupation, and income can make us perform better, even with lesser cognitive functioning. This research made me wonder if there are other such areas of the brain affected by SES, other than those related to phonological language skills. If there are, then that could greatly influence the kinds of teaching methods that could help bridge the achievement gap. This author seemed credible, given her large list of sources, her solid research methods, and her description of the subjects. I plan on using her list of sources to further my own research.
6. And now a question for you, Joan: my current focus question is what methods best narrow the achievement gaps among students from different socioeconomic classes? I have been thinking about this not only in terms of income, parent education, etc (factors that fall into the definition of socioeconomic status), but also in terms of race and ethnicity (factors that are not normally considered as a part of SES). I want to continue to look at both, but is this too wide of a topic for my project? If I did choose to continue looking into SES and race/ethnicity, would it be better if I looked at only one group? Please let me know what you think. Thank you in advance!
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I love what you said about being hopeful but really looking at its strengths and weaknesses before implementing it. When people are excited about something knew they tend to only focus on the possible positive outcomes while overlooking the weaknesses. I also agree with your idea of a well-educated person. I love how to describe them as having a thirst for knowledge. They must have something within that drives them to continue to acquire new knowledge. I too appreciate Ravich’s honesty. I completely agree with your thoughts about her willingness to admit her own mistakes. I also think that it adds validity to her position. This book provides very interesting insight into how and what changed her mind. I am really intrigued by your Latino Achievement Gap source. I work in a school that is predominantly Hispanic and Latino and I do see that my students have a wide range of English Language skills. My school is constantly working on addressing this issue so that our student’s needs are met and it is a very big challenge.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Katherine! I would love to talk to you sometime about your experience teaching at your school. In fact, any interest in being interviewed for my Capstone project documentary? Seriously, let me know :)
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ReplyDeleteI really liked your comments about well-educated people. I too do not think a well-educated person needs to explain concepts in a teacher-like manner, however I do think it is necessary for a well-educated person to articulate what they know. I also found your comments about the business letter very interesting. This standard is something that every 10th grade public school teacher MUST teach, because a business letter is one of the options for the writing prompt on the CAHSEE test. The websites that you found might actually help me do this in a more efficient way, so thanks! I really love your research topic. I studied African American English (AAE) while taking Linguistics as an undergrad and there was a lot of information about African American student achievement and the use of AAE. I also found your Latino achievement gap information very interesting. I do not have many Latino students, but those that I do have seem to struggle quite a bit with my English class and writing in general. I am very interested to see what else you find.
Thank you for your insight, Megan! That's interesting about a business letter being on the CAHSEE; I don't know that the students at my old school learned to do that. Then again, I don't teach 10th grade English, so I can't say for sure.
DeleteI really like the quotes you pulled out from Ravitch's The Death and Life of the Great American School System. I like how you talked about how it is okay to be hopeful about an idea but how everyone should look at the pros and cons before making a decision to see what the possible out comes are. I think that would been extremely beneficial when looking at what the possible outcomes of No Child Left Behind.
ReplyDeleteI also found you gap of content knowledge interesting as well. I never thought that would be part of the content standard either, but definitely good to know! Thank you for sharing the link for the for the letter generator, it will come in handy!
Thank you, Sarah! That's an interesting point about NCLB. You're welcome for the letter generator! That seems to be a pretty handy cite :)
DeleteJennifer,
ReplyDeleteI think teaching freshmen and sophomores to write a business letter is optimistic. There are other skills they could be focusing on that are more immediate such as learning to write an essay for college. Allow students to write a business letter in college when they will be more mature, motivated and possibly have minor experience in business culture.
The Latino Achievement Gap sounds like an informative read. I'm interested to find out if it's useful to your project and classroom teaching.
-Kristina
Thank you, Kristina! There is definitely a lot to learn in the 9th and 10th grade English curriculums, but I think it's important to present students with many writing styles as early as possible. College becomes so specialized that it's completely possible students wouldn't learn how to write a business letter there (I know I certainly didn't). That's just my take on the subject, though :) Thanks again!
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